Editing for Sharpness and Trust
Remove adjectives that do not carry proof and keep details that demonstrate expertise. If a sentence would not persuade a skeptical stakeholder, delete it. Trim relentlessly until each line earns attention through clarity and consequence.
Editing for Sharpness and Trust
Prefer verbs that show action over adjectives that promise greatness. Implemented, simplified, and validated beat robust and world class. Strong verbs anchor your role in the outcome, helping readers see exactly how you moved the project forward.
